The children were just having a normal day until they came across a waterfall. Their faces were already filled with excitement. The waterfall is sparkling down to the bottom water. I can see the clouds grey so it looks like it's gonna rain. The children are probably doing a treasure hunt but you have to find the magical places. I can see fish under the water moving so fast that when they get close they all move. If I stood close to the waterfall there would be spitting water at my face and it would sound like the wind going through my ear and out another.
I would see birds chirping happily with their family, fishy moving happily and the bird looking angrily saying in its head, get off my lawn. Trees are swaying side to side like they are dancing to the music. The grass feels soft like a fluffy dog. The kids are pointing at something at a fish that is special. I think the children are visiting the waterfall because they might be camping or doing a treasure hunt or just visiting for fun. The waterfall is rocky so they all got a warning to be careful.
Kia ora Navala
ReplyDeleteI liked your writing very much, it was great but mine was very short.
Look John it doesn't matter how much writing you have done what matter is that at lease you did some, so keep up the hard work and push your self to do more writing. I know you can do it
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