Tuesday, 29 June 2021

Fresh and smooth my story

 


So Fresh and smooth are sisters and brother they got separated. They got put in lunch boxes. The journey about fresh and smooth was about never throwing away trash because it could end up in the sea. Fresh is the girl and smooth is the boy. The brother always used to make the sisters laugh. So there were in the lunch boxes they took their bag and went to school. Then when it was time to eat fresh she got the container and threw it away then it got washed up in the drain and started to float away.Then it ended up in the sea and got  water inside and it sinked to the bottom then when it was sinking it saw fishes jelly fishes and other stuff like that. Fresh journey was when she was in someone 's hands and then he got put somewhere. Fresh was in the garden and he was in the pukeko’s garden the pukeko’s was going to attack him  but had a little talk and then the pukeko’s said Waiaraka than fresh said no I don’t know Wairaka. So then fresh walked off and went somewhere off. When my class went on the stage We were nervous and we sang Welcome home from Dave dobbyn. I was the only one singing because all of my class were nervous and I was a little bit too. I saw  my parents there and my Nana. My aunty did not come because we did not have enough tickets, sad life. But it was ok because she went somewhere fun with her friend. After our class Room 23 fresh and smooth came back and smooth started crying and he said it's tears of joy then they said I will never leave you again. Then fresh said where is all your yogurt my one is still inside me.


2 comments:

  1. Hi Navala,
    Ted here from room 25
    That is a really good descriptive writing it is very intersting maybe next time you add a picture of you and your class in the costumes.
    Ted

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    1. Thank you ted for the comment. :)

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