One day the boy was playing video games and his mom brang in a box for him. As soon as he touched it a dog came out of it. It had a big smile on its face. The boy picked it up and had a look at it. After he took a look at it he saw it had a missing leg. He did not like it, so he threw it down to the floor like it was trash. When the dog was upside down he saw a red ball underneath the shelf, so he got up and ran to the shelf and as soon as he got to the shelf he hit his head. Then went under to get it. He started to have a lot of fun with it. Then the boy looked at the dog and was thinking in his head this is a cool three legged dog. Then the dog brang the red ball to the boy's foot then he kicked it and the boy chased it. He kept on falling down but got back up and kept on going till he got it. When he got the ball he fell in the box then the box went upside down then the dog was stuck. Then the dog got out and went to the ball and when he got to the ball he flipped over.Then the dog was running inside the box like there was nothing in it. Then the dog took a look in the box to see if the ball was inside there.Then when the boy got used to the dog the dog got the ball and gave the ball to the boy. The boy picked up the ball and got up with one leg and went outside to play with the dog. Then the boy was happy with the dog and had fun. The boy must of got into a car crash I think that has he got one leg. The moral of the story is to be grateful for what you are given. |
Hi Navala, my name is Amy from Rm 7 owairaka district school.
ReplyDeleteGood job on your writing!
What was your favourite part of making it?
Maybe you could change how you put in the writing because it is going out the page a little.
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Talofa lava Navala.
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your story with us. It was nice to read that even though the dog only had 3 legs, it didn't stop him from having fun. At the end, the boy had a change of heart and began to play with the dog. This is a beautiful story to read. For next time, instead of using 'brang'the correct word is 'brought'.