Welcome to my blog! This is a place where I can share my learning. My blog is a collection of questions, ideas, learning in progress and finished work.
Our school-wide theme this year is 'In Our Backyard. Kia mau ki te tokanga nui a noho - there is no place like home.' Please make comments so I can deepen my understanding, learn about new ideas and improve my work.
Hello Navala, I'm Tia from room 24 and I love the stories! I think story 2 has my eye. It's a small door that opens up to a calm and lovely place but somethings not right. Maybe the door is not what it seems and that's what I love about it! you should make the stories into a whole story file or even a book! The story for number 3 also has my eye, a door to the sky's and a star light wonder land. You make me love your stories even more! What made you pick that photo for story 2 and 3, and did you do this whole thing on your own or was it a task from your class? See you later.
Hi Navala Kahvel here and I really like your doorway writing. it's really creative and cool. Maybe next time the punctuation would make your story even better and also maybe put some verbs and adverbs in here. kahvel.
Hello Navala, I'm Tia from room 24 and I love the stories! I think story 2 has my eye. It's a small door that opens up to a calm and lovely place but somethings not right. Maybe the door is not what it seems and that's what I love about it! you should make the stories into a whole story file or even a book! The story for number 3 also has my eye, a door to the sky's and a star light wonder land. You make me love your stories even more! What made you pick that photo for story 2 and 3, and did you do this whole thing on your own or was it a task from your class? See you later.
ReplyDeleteHi Navala Kahvel here and I really like your doorway writing. it's really creative and cool. Maybe next time the punctuation would make your story even better and also maybe put some verbs and adverbs in here.
ReplyDeletekahvel.